Web pages spelling and grammar problems

Started by 1EasyGamer, August 16, 2010, 07:26:54 AM MT

1EasyGamer

I found these spellings and grammatical problems in the Spells game info page. First line is original second line is my suggestion. I am not an English Major so these are just how I would expect them to be from experience. Have someone else verify these changes.

If any dice hit, unit loess exactly 2 life
If any dice hit, unit loses exactly 2 life

Manipulation spells allow you to transform the layout of the battefield,
Manipulation spells allow you to transform the layout of the battlefield,

change the positions of units
change the position of units

not end moves on space wall returns.
not end moves on wall return spaces.

The awesome destructive force of Papillion's magic is balanced with by its equally
potent ability to renew life and restore order.
The awesome destructive forces of Papillion's magic find their balance in the equally
potent Recovery magic school and its ability to renew life and restore order.


Ranging from henious undead to beings embodying the raw essence
Ranging from heinous undead to beings embodying the raw essence

1EasyGamer

Suggestions for the Creatures game info page:

perfect combination of strength and reslience that make them
perfect combination of strength and resilience that make them

gleam of a Crystal Golem is a magnificant sight to behold
gleam of a Crystal Golem is a magnificent sight to behold

escape the fury of its devasting attack
escape the fury of its devastating attack

that have been diabolically stiched together
that have been diabolically stitched together

I also noticed the summoning cost of the Creatures are missing.

1EasyGamer

Suggestions for the Guardians game info page:

her celestial platemail and divine healing
her celestial plate mail and divine healing

the ellusive rogue is a deadly hero
the elusive rogue is a deadly hero

While his low strength may seem like a weakness, his ability to attack twice more than compensates.
While his low strength may seem like a weakness, his ability to attack twice more than compensates for it.

Magically boost his strength for double the bonus.
Magically boost his strength to double the bonus.

the uncanny psionist has
the uncanny Psionist has

perfect mage assasin and, as such
perfect mage assassin and, as such

position her in chokepoints to get the most
position her in choke points to get the most

Though dormat for centuries in their underground
Though dormant for centuries in their underground

Ross Przybylski

Wow, thanks for catching and reporting these, EasyGamer!  I'll get these errors corrected and updated later today.
Manager of D20Studios, LLC

1EasyGamer

Suggestions for the Mages game info page:

mages are the only unit that
the Mage is the only unit that

can cast spells- potent magical
can cast spells: potent magical

of the elements,, manipulate the
of the elements, manipulate the

advantage casting spells of from their specialized School of Magic.
advantage casting spells from their School of Magic specialization.

A clan of aggressive and competitive elves led by their ruler, Albirich, inhabits the heavily wooded areas on the outskirts of the Empire.
From a clan of aggressive and competitive elves led by their ruler, Albirich, they inhabit the heavily wooded areas on the outskirts of the Empire.

they learned magic to bolster their
they learn magic to bolster their

Driven by passion and a desire for freedom, these girls discover their powers at a young age, often amidst disastrous circumstances.
Driven by passion and a desire for freedom at an early age, they often discover their powers with disastrous circumstances.

the volcanic southlands swearing
the volcanic Southlands swearing

making the promise of her revenge all the more terrifying.
making her promise of revenge all the more terrifying.

study the ancient text of a civilization
study the ancient texts of a civilization

to understand its secrets and unlock its power, the wizards’ obsession
to understand its secrets and unlock its powers, the wizards' obsession

they have gained uncanny insight in how to manipulate their surroundings
they have gained an uncanny insight in the manipulation of their surroundings

Also, I would rather see the abilities for each Mage listed down in ascending order of Valor and the Passive ability at the bottom.

1EasyGamer